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Because my journal entries are in Australian time and my flist is in THEIR local time, I have no idea how recent the most recent of my flist entries are. Is anyone online, and if they are, would they be willing to do a quick beta of my Rita/Neville fic for me before I post it? For continuity and characterisation, mostly, since I'm not sure if I've justified Neville's possibly OOC behaviour.

I'll love you forever *bats eyelids*

Ping me on AIM at 'severusyesohyes', or drop an emal to feather_quill_writer_girl@hotmail.com

ETA: Thanks, lysa1!

Fic: Venom

Title: Venom
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Rita/Neville
Summary: This is not a love song.
Warnings: Light D/s, I think.
Challenge: Written for plaidpheonix's rarepair FQF, but I think I missed the deadline by a day or twenty. Claimed Rita, Neville, St Mungos and Post-Hogwarts
A/N:Thanks to lysa1 for very quick beta.

( Taloned fingers close around his upper arm. She pulls him back; he feels a coil of hair and her hot breath on his cheek when she hisses in his ear. He can hear the sizzling venom on her tongue )