Thank you so much for this! I'm glad you like the fic, and it makes me full of squee to get reviews on things I wrote some time ago.
With regards to Minerva's use of curses, I agree in a way. I would never expect to hear her swear. I think I might have used them to show just how angry she was, how much control she'd lost, and because, well, Rita tends to inspire that sort of reaction in people :P.
Btw, if you want more Rita fic and haven't seen it yet, there is a masterlist (http://www.livejournal.com/users/featherxquill/69323.html) that I compiled some time ago and keep as up-to-date as possible (some of the links don't work, but that's mostly to the art, and I've kept them there so that I might one day chase down the artists and see if I can find them again).
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Thank you so much for this! I'm glad you like the fic, and it makes me full of squee to get reviews on things I wrote some time ago.
With regards to Minerva's use of curses, I agree in a way. I would never expect to hear her swear. I think I might have used them to show just how angry she was, how much control she'd lost, and because, well, Rita tends to inspire that sort of reaction in people :P.
Btw, if you want more Rita fic and haven't seen it yet, there is a masterlist (http://www.livejournal.com/users/featherxquill/69323.html) that I compiled some time ago and keep as up-to-date as possible (some of the links don't work, but that's mostly to the art, and I've kept them there so that I might one day chase down the artists and see if I can find them again).