And perhaps it was just my grief addled mind, a desperate hope to cling to something, but as Severus Snape watched with his face impassive, I’m sure I saw something behind his eyes that was possibly more broken than I was.
Oh my God. Beautiful. You portrayed Molly very accurately for a younger version, and I just loved the line about Severus. Even as a Death Eater, I still imagine him having doubts. I also didn't even realize who they were until you wrote it out, and then I went back through and saw how perfectly you let their voices fit them.
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Date: 2005-04-21 04:24 am (UTC)Oh my God. Beautiful. You portrayed Molly very accurately for a younger version, and I just loved the line about Severus. Even as a Death Eater, I still imagine him having doubts. I also didn't even realize who they were until you wrote it out, and then I went back through and saw how perfectly you let their voices fit them.
Overall, simply a wonderful piece. ^_^